Sentence Structure and Formation
Run-ons, fragments, comma splices, modifiers
Sentence Structure and Formation (ACT English)
Complete Sentences
What Makes a Complete Sentence?
A complete sentence must have:
- Subject (who or what)
- Predicate (verb and what it does)
- Complete thought (makes sense on its own)
✓ Complete: "The dog barked loudly."
❌ Incomplete: "The dog barking loudly." (no complete verb)
❌ Incomplete: "Because the dog barked." (not a complete thought)
Sentence Fragments
A fragment is missing a subject, verb, or complete thought
Type 1: Missing Subject
❌ "Ran to the store quickly."
✓ "She ran to the store quickly."
Type 2: Missing Verb or Incomplete Verb
❌ "The students studying for the exam."
✓ "The students are studying for the exam."
✓ "The students studied for the exam."
Note: "-ing" words alone are NOT complete verbs!
Type 3: Dependent Clause Fragment
❌ "Because I was tired."
✓ "Because I was tired, I went to bed early."
✓ "I went to bed early because I was tired."
Common subordinators that create dependent clauses:
- although, because, since, while, when, if, unless, until, after, before
Run-On Sentences
A run-on improperly joins two independent clauses
Type 1: Fused Sentence (Comma Splice)
❌ "I love reading, I visit the library often."
✓ "I love reading**. I** visit the library often." (period)
✓ "I love reading**; I** visit the library often." (semicolon)
✓ "I love reading**, so I** visit the library often." (comma + conjunction)
Type 2: No Punctuation
❌ "The test was hard I studied for hours."
✓ "The test was hard. I studied for hours."
✓ "The test was hard; I studied for hours."
✓ "The test was hard, so I studied for hours."
Ways to Join Sentences
Method 1: Period
Use when: Sentences are complete and independent
✓ "The movie ended. Everyone applauded."
Method 2: Semicolon
Use when: Sentences are closely related
✓ "I love summer; it's my favorite season."
Can also use semicolon before conjunctive adverbs:
✓ "She studied hard; therefore, she passed."
✓ "The weather was bad; however, we went anyway."
Common conjunctive adverbs: however, therefore, moreover, furthermore, nevertheless, consequently
Method 3: Comma + Coordinating Conjunction
FANBOYS: For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So
✓ "I wanted to go, but I was too tired."
✓ "She studied hard, and she passed the exam."
MUST have both comma AND conjunction!
❌ "I wanted to go but I was too tired." (missing comma)
❌ "I wanted to go, I was too tired." (missing conjunction)
Method 4: Subordination
Make one clause dependent:
✓ "Because I was tired, I went to bed."
✓ "I went to bed because I was tired."
Note: Comma rules
- Comma AFTER dependent clause if it comes first
- NO comma if dependent clause comes second (usually)
Sentence Types
Simple Sentence
One independent clause
✓ "The cat slept."
✓ "The large orange cat slept peacefully on the warm couch."
(Still simple even with lots of modifiers — only ONE subject-verb pair doing ONE action)
Compound Sentence
Two or more independent clauses joined
✓ "The cat slept, and the dog barked."
✓ "I wanted pizza; she wanted tacos."
Complex Sentence
One independent clause + one or more dependent clauses
✓ "When I arrived, the party had started." (dependent + independent)
✓ "The book that I borrowed was excellent." (independent with embedded dependent)
Compound-Complex Sentence
Two or more independent clauses + one or more dependent clauses
✓ "When I arrived, the party had started, and everyone was dancing."
Parallel Structure
Items in a list or comparison must have the same grammatical form
Lists
❌ "I like swimming, to run, and biking."
✓ "I like swimming, running, and biking." (all -ing)
✓ "I like to swim, to run, and to bike." (all infinitives)
Comparisons
❌ "The new policy is better than what we had before."
✓ "The new policy is better than the old policy."
Correlative Conjunctions
Pairs: either...or, neither...nor, not only...but also, both...and
Rule: Same structure after each part
❌ "She is not only intelligent but also has creativity."
✓ "She is not only intelligent but also creative." (both adjectives)
✓ "She not only is intelligent but also has creativity." (both verb phrases)
Modifiers
Misplaced Modifiers
Problem: Modifier is too far from what it modifies
❌ "I saw a dog running down the street with a wagging tail."
(Sounds like the street has a wagging tail!)
✓ "I saw a dog with a wagging tail running down the street."
Dangling Modifiers
Problem: What the modifier describes isn't in the sentence
❌ "After studying all night, the exam was easy."
(The exam didn't study!)
✓ "After studying all night, I found the exam easy."
✓ "After I studied all night, the exam was easy."
Common opening modifiers that can dangle:
- After/before + -ing: "After finishing..."
- While + -ing: "While walking..."
- To + verb: "To succeed..."
Rule: Subject of main clause must be what the modifier describes
Wordiness and Redundancy
Redundant Pairs
❌ "first and foremost" → ✓ "first"
❌ "each and every" → ✓ "each" or "every"
❌ "past history" → ✓ "history"
❌ "end result" → ✓ "result"
❌ "completely finish" → ✓ "finish"
❌ "advance planning" → ✓ "planning"
Wordy Phrases
| Wordy | Concise | |-------|---------| | due to the fact that | because | | in spite of the fact that | although | | at this point in time | now | | in the event that | if | | has the ability to | can | | is able to | can | | in order to | to |
Passive Voice
Active (preferred): Subject does the action
Passive: Action is done to subject
❌ "The ball was thrown by John." (passive, wordy)
✓ "John threw the ball." (active, concise)
Passive is okay when:
- Actor is unknown: "The window was broken."
- Actor is unimportant: "The test was administered yesterday."
ACT Question Strategies
Fragment vs Complete
Strategy:
- Find the verb — is it complete?
- Find the subject
- Check if it's a dependent clause standing alone
Red flags for fragments:
- Words ending in -ing with no helping verb
- "Because," "Although," "Since" at start with no main clause
- Missing subject or verb
Run-On Detection
Strategy:
- Find where one complete thought ends
- Check if two complete thoughts are properly joined
- Look for comma splices (just comma between two clauses)
Fix options:
- Period
- Semicolon
- Comma + FANBOYS
- Make one clause dependent
Parallel Structure
Strategy:
- Identify items in the list/comparison
- Check they're all the same form (all -ing, all infinitives, all nouns, etc.)
- Pay attention to "and" — what's before should match what's after
Modifier Questions
Strategy:
- Find the modifier (usually at start of sentence)
- Find what it's supposed to modify
- Make sure they're next to each other
- Check that the subject of the sentence can logically do what the modifier describes
Common ACT Mistakes
❌ Thinking -ing is a complete verb
"The students working" is NOT complete
❌ Using comma to join two sentences
"I went home, I was tired" is wrong — need semicolon or conjunction
❌ Not matching parallel items
"swimming, to run, biking" — pick one form!
❌ Putting modifier next to wrong word
"Running quickly, the finish line appeared" — finish line can't run!
❌ Keeping redundant phrases
"past history" and "end result" are redundant
❌ Choosing wordy over concise
ACT prefers shorter when meaning is the same
Quick Tips for ACT
✓ Every sentence needs subject + verb + complete thought
✓ "-ing" words need helping verbs (is running, was studying)
✓ Comma alone can't join sentences — need conjunction too
✓ Semicolon = strong period — joins related complete thoughts
✓ Items in list must match form — all nouns, all verbs, etc.
✓ Modifiers describe what comes right after — check logic
✓ Shorter is better — eliminate wordiness
✓ Check FANBOYS — for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so
Decision Tree for Joining Sentences
When you have two complete thoughts:
-
Are they closely related?
- NO → Use period
- YES → Continue to #2
-
Do you want to show relationship?
- NO → Use semicolon
- YES → Continue to #3
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What's the relationship?
- Contrast → , but / , yet / ; however,
- Addition → , and / ; furthermore,
- Cause → , so / , for / ; therefore,
- Alternative → , or
- Result → , so / ; consequently,
Practice Approach
- Read the whole sentence — don't just look at underlined part
- Check for complete thought — subject, verb, makes sense
- Look for two complete thoughts — are they properly joined?
- Identify lists or comparisons — check parallel structure
- Find modifiers — what do they modify? Are they placed correctly?
- Eliminate wordiness — choose concise option
- Read with your answer — does it sound right?
Remember: The ACT loves testing fragments, run-ons, and parallel structure. Know how to identify and fix these, and you'll handle many English questions with confidence!
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