Sentence Structure and Formation
Run-ons, fragments, comma splices, modifiers
Sentence Structure and Formation (ACT English)
Complete Sentences
What Makes a Complete Sentence?
A complete sentence must have:
- Subject (who or what)
- Predicate (verb and what it does)
- Complete thought (makes sense on its own)
✓ Complete: "The dog barked loudly."
❌ Incomplete: "The dog barking loudly." (no complete verb)
❌ Incomplete: "Because the dog barked." (not a complete thought)
Sentence Fragments
A fragment is missing a subject, verb, or complete thought
Type 1: Missing Subject
❌ "Ran to the store quickly."
✓ "She ran to the store quickly."
Type 2: Missing Verb or Incomplete Verb
❌ "The students studying for the exam."
✓ "The students are studying for the exam."
✓ "The students studied for the exam."
Note: "-ing" words alone are NOT complete verbs!
Type 3: Dependent Clause Fragment
❌ "Because I was tired."
✓ "Because I was tired, I went to bed early."
✓ "I went to bed early because I was tired."
Common subordinators that create dependent clauses:
- although, because, since, while, when, if, unless, until, after, before
Run-On Sentences
A run-on improperly joins two independent clauses
Type 1: Fused Sentence (Comma Splice)
❌ "I love reading, I visit the library often."
✓ "I love reading**. I** visit the library often." (period)
✓ "I love reading**; I** visit the library often." (semicolon)
✓ "I love reading**, so I** visit the library often." (comma + conjunction)
Type 2: No Punctuation
❌ "The test was hard I studied for hours."
✓ "The test was hard. I studied for hours."
✓ "The test was hard; I studied for hours."
✓ "The test was hard, so I studied for hours."
Ways to Join Sentences
Method 1: Period
Use when: Sentences are complete and independent
✓ "The movie ended. Everyone applauded."
Method 2: Semicolon
Use when: Sentences are closely related
✓ "I love summer; it's my favorite season."
Can also use semicolon before conjunctive adverbs:
✓ "She studied hard; therefore, she passed."
✓ "The weather was bad; however, we went anyway."
Common conjunctive adverbs: however, therefore, moreover, furthermore, nevertheless, consequently
Method 3: Comma + Coordinating Conjunction
FANBOYS: For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So
✓ "I wanted to go, but I was too tired."
✓ "She studied hard, and she passed the exam."
MUST have both comma AND conjunction!
❌ "I wanted to go but I was too tired." (missing comma)
❌ "I wanted to go, I was too tired." (missing conjunction)
Method 4: Subordination
Make one clause dependent:
✓ "Because I was tired, I went to bed."
✓ "I went to bed because I was tired."
Note: Comma rules
- Comma AFTER dependent clause if it comes first
- NO comma if dependent clause comes second (usually)
Sentence Types
Simple Sentence
One independent clause
✓ "The cat slept."
✓ "The large orange cat slept peacefully on the warm couch."
(Still simple even with lots of modifiers — only ONE subject-verb pair doing ONE action)
Compound Sentence
Two or more independent clauses joined
✓ "The cat slept, and the dog barked."
✓ "I wanted pizza; she wanted tacos."
Complex Sentence
One independent clause + one or more dependent clauses
✓ "When I arrived, the party had started." (dependent + independent)
✓ "The book that I borrowed was excellent." (independent with embedded dependent)
Compound-Complex Sentence
Two or more independent clauses + one or more dependent clauses
✓ "When I arrived, the party had started, and everyone was dancing."
Parallel Structure
Items in a list or comparison must have the same grammatical form
Lists
❌ "I like swimming, to run, and biking."
✓ "I like swimming, running, and biking." (all -ing)
✓ "I like to swim, to run, and to bike." (all infinitives)
Comparisons
❌ "The new policy is better than what we had before."
✓ "The new policy is better than the old policy."
Correlative Conjunctions
Pairs: either...or, neither...nor, not only...but also, both...and
Rule: Same structure after each part
❌ "She is not only intelligent but also has creativity."
✓ "She is not only intelligent but also creative." (both adjectives)
✓ "She not only is intelligent but also has creativity." (both verb phrases)
Modifiers
Misplaced Modifiers
Problem: Modifier is too far from what it modifies
❌ "I saw a dog running down the street with a wagging tail."
(Sounds like the street has a wagging tail!)
✓ "I saw a dog with a wagging tail running down the street."
Dangling Modifiers
Problem: What the modifier describes isn't in the sentence
❌ "After studying all night, the exam was easy."
(The exam didn't study!)
✓ "After studying all night, I found the exam easy."
✓ "After I studied all night, the exam was easy."
Common opening modifiers that can dangle:
- After/before + -ing: "After finishing..."
- While + -ing: "While walking..."
- To + verb: "To succeed..."
Rule: Subject of main clause must be what the modifier describes
Wordiness and Redundancy
Redundant Pairs
❌ "first and foremost" → ✓ "first"
❌ "each and every" → ✓ "each" or "every"
❌ "past history" → ✓ "history"
❌ "end result" → ✓ "result"
❌ "completely finish" → ✓ "finish"
❌ "advance planning" → ✓ "planning"
Wordy Phrases
| Wordy | Concise | |-------|---------| | due to the fact that | because | | in spite of the fact that | although | | at this point in time | now | | in the event that | if | | has the ability to | can | | is able to | can | | in order to | to |
Passive Voice
Active (preferred): Subject does the action
Passive: Action is done to subject
❌ "The ball was thrown by John." (passive, wordy)
✓ "John threw the ball." (active, concise)
Passive is okay when:
- Actor is unknown: "The window was broken."
- Actor is unimportant: "The test was administered yesterday."
ACT Question Strategies
Fragment vs Complete
Strategy:
- Find the verb — is it complete?
- Find the subject
- Check if it's a dependent clause standing alone
Red flags for fragments:
- Words ending in -ing with no helping verb
- "Because," "Although," "Since" at start with no main clause
- Missing subject or verb
Run-On Detection
Strategy:
- Find where one complete thought ends
- Check if two complete thoughts are properly joined
- Look for comma splices (just comma between two clauses)
Fix options:
- Period
- Semicolon
- Comma + FANBOYS
- Make one clause dependent
Parallel Structure
Strategy:
- Identify items in the list/comparison
- Check they're all the same form (all -ing, all infinitives, all nouns, etc.)
- Pay attention to "and" — what's before should match what's after
Modifier Questions
Strategy:
- Find the modifier (usually at start of sentence)
- Find what it's supposed to modify
- Make sure they're next to each other
- Check that the subject of the sentence can logically do what the modifier describes
Common ACT Mistakes
❌ Thinking -ing is a complete verb
"The students working" is NOT complete
❌ Using comma to join two sentences
"I went home, I was tired" is wrong — need semicolon or conjunction
❌ Not matching parallel items
"swimming, to run, biking" — pick one form!
❌ Putting modifier next to wrong word
"Running quickly, the finish line appeared" — finish line can't run!
❌ Keeping redundant phrases
"past history" and "end result" are redundant
❌ Choosing wordy over concise
ACT prefers shorter when meaning is the same
Quick Tips for ACT
✓ Every sentence needs subject + verb + complete thought
✓ "-ing" words need helping verbs (is running, was studying)
✓ Comma alone can't join sentences — need conjunction too
✓ Semicolon = strong period — joins related complete thoughts
✓ Items in list must match form — all nouns, all verbs, etc.
✓ Modifiers describe what comes right after — check logic
✓ Shorter is better — eliminate wordiness
✓ Check FANBOYS — for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so
Decision Tree for Joining Sentences
When you have two complete thoughts:
-
Are they closely related?
- NO → Use period
- YES → Continue to #2
-
Do you want to show relationship?
- NO → Use semicolon
- YES → Continue to #3
-
What's the relationship?
- Contrast → , but / , yet / ; however,
- Addition → , and / ; furthermore,
- Cause → , so / , for / ; therefore,
- Alternative → , or
- Result → , so / ; consequently,
Practice Approach
- Read the whole sentence — don't just look at underlined part
- Check for complete thought — subject, verb, makes sense
- Look for two complete thoughts — are they properly joined?
- Identify lists or comparisons — check parallel structure
- Find modifiers — what do they modify? Are they placed correctly?
- Eliminate wordiness — choose concise option
- Read with your answer — does it sound right?
Remember: The ACT loves testing fragments, run-ons, and parallel structure. Know how to identify and fix these, and you'll handle many English questions with confidence!
📚 Practice Problems
1Problem 1easy
❓ Question:
The team practiced hard, they won the championship.
Which of the following is the best revision?
A) NO CHANGE B) hard; they won C) hard and they won D) hard, and they won
💡 Show Solution
This is a comma splice - two independent clauses joined by only a comma.
Problem: "The team practiced hard" and "they won the championship" are both complete sentences.
Step 1: Identify the error Comma splice - comma alone can't join two independent clauses
Step 2: Evaluate options A) NO CHANGE - comma splice (incorrect) B) hard; they won - semicolon correctly joins (correct!) C) hard and they won - needs comma before "and" (incorrect) D) hard, and they won - compound sentence (also correct!)
Both B and D are grammatically correct!
Answer: B) hard; they won OR D) hard, and they won
(ACT would typically make only one option work, likely B)
Fixes for comma splices:
- Semicolon: hard; they won
- Comma + coordinating conjunction: hard, and they won
- Period: hard. They won
- Subordinating conjunction: Because they practiced hard, they won
2Problem 2medium
❓ Question:
Running quickly down the street, the bus was missed by Sarah.
Which is the best revision to fix the misplaced modifier?
F) NO CHANGE G) the bus, it was missed by Sarah. H) Sarah missed the bus. J) Sarah was missing the bus. K) missing the bus was Sarah.
💡 Show Solution
A misplaced modifier - "Running quickly down the street" incorrectly modifies "the bus."
Problem: The bus wasn't running - Sarah was!
Step 1: Identify who is performing the action Sarah is running (not the bus)
Step 2: Place the modifier next to what it modifies The opening phrase should modify Sarah, so Sarah must come immediately after the comma.
Step 3: Evaluate options F) NO CHANGE - bus is running (illogical!) G) the bus, it was missed - still has bus running H) Sarah missed the bus - CORRECT! Sarah directly follows modifier J) Sarah was missing - wrong tense K) missing the bus was Sarah - awkward structure
Answer: H) Sarah missed the bus.
Modifier rule: Place descriptive phrases next to what they describe!
Correct: Running quickly, Sarah missed the bus. Incorrect: Running quickly, the bus was missed.
3Problem 3hard
❓ Question:
Although the weather was cold, and we decided to go hiking anyway.
Which is the correct revision?
A) NO CHANGE B) cold, we decided C) cold; and we decided D) cold. And we decided E) cold, yet we decided
💡 Show Solution
This is a sentence fragment - the subordinating conjunction "Although" makes the first clause dependent.
Problem: "Although" + "and" creates confusion. You can't have both!
Step 1: Understand subordinating conjunctions "Although" creates a dependent clause that needs an independent clause to complete it.
Step 2: Analyze the structure "Although the weather was cold" = dependent clause (incomplete) "we decided to go hiking anyway" = independent clause (complete)
These should be joined by a comma, not "and"!
Step 3: Evaluate options A) NO CHANGE - has both "although" and "and" (incorrect) B) cold, we decided - correctly joins dependent + independent (CORRECT!) C) cold; and we decided - semicolon wrong with "although" (incorrect) D) cold. And we decided - creates fragment (incorrect) E) cold, yet we decided - "although" + "yet" is redundant (incorrect)
Answer: B) cold, we decided
Subordinating conjunctions (make clause dependent): although, because, since, while, when, if, unless, after, before
Pattern: [Although dependent clause], [independent clause]. No additional conjunction needed!
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