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Identify and correct sentence structure errors including fragments, run-ons, comma splices, misplaced modifiers, and faulty parallelism.
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A fragment is a group of words that looks like a sentence but lacks a subject, a verb, or a complete thought.
A run-on joins two independent clauses without proper punctuation or conjunction.
Which is correct?
A) I love reading, my sister prefers sports. B) I love reading; my sister prefers sports. C) I love reading my sister prefers sports.
Solution:
Two complete sentences:
Check each option:
A) Comma alone (comma splice) โ B) Semicolon (correct way to join) โ C) No punctuation (run-on) โ
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For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So โ join equal elements.
Because, although, when, while, if, since, unless, until, after, before โ make one clause dependent.
Elements in a series or comparison must match grammatically:
Also applies to correlative conjunctions:
Answer: B
SAT Tip: Comma CANNOT join two complete sentences alone!
Which is correct?
A) Walking to school, the rain started falling. B) Walking to school, I felt the rain start falling. C) Walking to school, it rained. D) The rain, walking to school, started.
Solution:
Opening modifier: "Walking to school"
Rule: Must describe the subject immediately after comma
Check each:
A) The rain walked to school? โ B) "I" walked to school โ (makes sense!) C) "It" (rain) walked to school? โ D) Awkward/unclear โ
Answer: B
SAT Tip: Opening modifying phrase must clearly describe the subject that follows!
Which maintains parallel structure?
A) The goals are to increase revenue, reducing costs, and improve efficiency. B) The goals are to increase revenue, to reduce costs, and improving efficiency. C) The goals are to increase revenue, to reduce costs, and to improve efficiency. D) The goals are increasing revenue, to reduce costs, and to improve efficiency.
Solution:
Parallel structure: All items must have same form
Check each:
A) to increase, reducing, improve (THREE DIFFERENT FORMS) โ B) to increase, to reduce, improving (NOT ALL SAME) โ C) to increase, to reduce, to improve (ALL INFINITIVES) โ D) increasing, to reduce, to improve (NOT ALL SAME) โ
Answer: C
SAT Tip: In a list, all items should match: all infinitives, all -ing forms, all nouns, etc.
Identify the error: "Running through the park on a sunny afternoon."
Error: This is a sentence fragment โ it has no main subject and verb.
"Running through the park on a sunny afternoon" is a participial phrase. It describes an action but doesn't tell us WHO is doing it and doesn't have a complete predicate.
Fix options:
What makes a complete sentence:
Answer: Fragment โ needs a subject and a main verb to be complete.
Identify the error: "Running through the park on a sunny afternoon."
Error: This is a sentence fragment โ it has no main subject and verb.
"Running through the park on a sunny afternoon" is a participial phrase. It describes an action but doesn't tell us WHO is doing it and doesn't have a complete predicate.
Fix options:
What makes a complete sentence:
Answer: Fragment โ needs a subject and a main verb to be complete.
Combine these sentences effectively: "The experiment yielded surprising results. The scientists decided to repeat it. They wanted to confirm their findings."
Option 1 โ Subordination: "Because the experiment yielded surprising results, the scientists decided to repeat it to confirm their findings." โ (Uses "because" to show cause-effect; "to confirm" combines sentences 2 and 3)
Option 2 โ Relative clause: "The experiment, which yielded surprising results, prompted the scientists to repeat it to confirm their findings." โ
Option 3 โ Participial phrase: "Surprised by the results, the scientists decided to repeat the experiment to confirm their findings." โ
Avoid:
SAT Principle: The most concise, clear combination is usually the best answer. Avoid unnecessary words and repetition.
Answer: "Because the experiment yielded surprising results, the scientists decided to repeat it to confirm their findings."
Combine these sentences effectively: "The experiment yielded surprising results. The scientists decided to repeat it. They wanted to confirm their findings."
Option 1 โ Subordination: "Because the experiment yielded surprising results, the scientists decided to repeat it to confirm their findings." โ (Uses "because" to show cause-effect; "to confirm" combines sentences 2 and 3)
Option 2 โ Relative clause: "The experiment, which yielded surprising results, prompted the scientists to repeat it to confirm their findings." โ
Option 3 โ Participial phrase: "Surprised by the results, the scientists decided to repeat the experiment to confirm their findings." โ
Avoid:
SAT Principle: The most concise, clear combination is usually the best answer. Avoid unnecessary words and repetition.
Answer: "Because the experiment yielded surprising results, the scientists decided to repeat it to confirm their findings."
Fix the run-on sentence: "The storm knocked out power to the entire neighborhood residents had to use candles and flashlights for three days."
This is a run-on sentence โ two independent clauses with no punctuation or conjunction between them.
Fix 1 โ Period: "The storm knocked out power to the entire neighborhood. Residents had to use candles and flashlights for three days."
Fix 2 โ Semicolon: "The storm knocked out power to the entire neighborhood; residents had to use candles and flashlights for three days."
Fix 3 โ Comma + conjunction: "The storm knocked out power to the entire neighborhood, so residents had to use candles and flashlights for three days."
Fix 4 โ Subordination: "After the storm knocked out power to the entire neighborhood, residents had to use candles and flashlights for three days."
Best for SAT: Fix 4 (subordination) is often the best answer because it shows the relationship between the clauses (cause โ effect).
Answer: Any of these fixes would work; subordination shows the clearest logical connection.
Fix the run-on sentence: "The storm knocked out power to the entire neighborhood residents had to use candles and flashlights for three days."
This is a run-on sentence โ two independent clauses with no punctuation or conjunction between them.
Fix 1 โ Period: "The storm knocked out power to the entire neighborhood. Residents had to use candles and flashlights for three days."
Fix 2 โ Semicolon: "The storm knocked out power to the entire neighborhood; residents had to use candles and flashlights for three days."
Fix 3 โ Comma + conjunction: "The storm knocked out power to the entire neighborhood, so residents had to use candles and flashlights for three days."
Fix 4 โ Subordination: "After the storm knocked out power to the entire neighborhood, residents had to use candles and flashlights for three days."
Best for SAT: Fix 4 (subordination) is often the best answer because it shows the relationship between the clauses (cause โ effect).
Answer: Any of these fixes would work; subordination shows the clearest logical connection.
Fix the parallel structure error: "The scholarship program aims to identify talented students, providing financial support, and to connect them with mentors."
Error: The list items are not in parallel form:
Fix โ Use consistent infinitives: "The scholarship program aims to identify talented students, to provide financial support, and to connect them with mentors." โ
Or โ Use consistent gerunds: "The scholarship program aims at identifying talented students, providing financial support, and connecting them with mentors." โ
Or โ Simplify with one "to": "The scholarship program aims to identify talented students, provide financial support, and connect them with mentors." โ
Rule: Items in a list must be in the same grammatical form (all infinitives, all gerunds, all nouns, etc.).
Answer: "...to identify talented students, provide financial support, and connect them with mentors."
Fix the parallel structure error: "The scholarship program aims to identify talented students, providing financial support, and to connect them with mentors."
Error: The list items are not in parallel form:
Fix โ Use consistent infinitives: "The scholarship program aims to identify talented students, to provide financial support, and to connect them with mentors." โ
Or โ Use consistent gerunds: "The scholarship program aims at identifying talented students, providing financial support, and connecting them with mentors." โ
Or โ Simplify with one "to": "The scholarship program aims to identify talented students, provide financial support, and connect them with mentors." โ
Rule: Items in a list must be in the same grammatical form (all infinitives, all gerunds, all nouns, etc.).
Answer: "...to identify talented students, provide financial support, and connect them with mentors."
Which revision most effectively combines these sentences? "Marie Curie was a pioneering scientist. She was born in Poland. She moved to France. She conducted groundbreaking research on radioactivity. She won two Nobel Prizes." (A) "Marie Curie was a pioneering scientist who was born in Poland and moved to France and conducted groundbreaking research on radioactivity and won two Nobel Prizes." (B) "Born in Poland, Marie Curie moved to France, where she conducted groundbreaking research on radioactivity, ultimately winning two Nobel Prizes." (C) "Marie Curie, a pioneering scientist, she was born in Poland, moved to France, conducted groundbreaking research, and won two Nobel Prizes."
Evaluate each option:
(A) Chains everything with "and" โ repetitive and hard to follow. โ
(B) Uses varied sentence structure:
(C) "a pioneering scientist, she was born" โ this creates a grammar error. After the appositive "a pioneering scientist," the sentence shouldn't add "she." โ
Why (B) is best:
Answer: (B) โ it combines the information most effectively with varied syntax and logical progression.
Which revision most effectively combines these sentences? "Marie Curie was a pioneering scientist. She was born in Poland. She moved to France. She conducted groundbreaking research on radioactivity. She won two Nobel Prizes." (A) "Marie Curie was a pioneering scientist who was born in Poland and moved to France and conducted groundbreaking research on radioactivity and won two Nobel Prizes." (B) "Born in Poland, Marie Curie moved to France, where she conducted groundbreaking research on radioactivity, ultimately winning two Nobel Prizes." (C) "Marie Curie, a pioneering scientist, she was born in Poland, moved to France, conducted groundbreaking research, and won two Nobel Prizes."
Evaluate each option:
(A) Chains everything with "and" โ repetitive and hard to follow. โ
(B) Uses varied sentence structure:
(C) "a pioneering scientist, she was born" โ this creates a grammar error. After the appositive "a pioneering scientist," the sentence shouldn't add "she." โ
Why (B) is best:
Answer: (B) โ it combines the information most effectively with varied syntax and logical progression.